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Great job! I really can't see much to critique except maybe her left shoulder (on our right) seems broader than the other one considering where the head is, but then maybe her head is leaning that way? Also, maybe you can work more highlights into the hair. The sunlight on her skin glares white, I think it should on the hair as well. And maybe her body should be casting a shadow on the grass?

I think you made the hands look really three dimensional, and you remembered to shade the eyeballs which is great. Most of the anatomy looks really good to me. Again, nice job!

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I think more grass should be 'ruffled'. The highlight bits above her lip need adjusting/tuning down a bit too in my opinion. + yup, definitely a shadow on the ground needed.
For background I would do something simple, maybe some out of focus/blurred clouds and a nice blue sky :]

+ also some depth of field on your grass ;]
I agree, blue sky to complement the grass, and maybe with a suggestion of the skyline (like hills or trees or something, but not really saturated) to stop the sky making it look flat. Congratulations on making it looks so 3D though, I love the way you've done the legs - especially in such a difficult pose to draw (for me anyway)

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